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Another tune for you to try out.   

Posted by vald - Dec 4, 2011 - 5:13pm
Hi Folks,

All your kind words inspired me to record this week.

Here is something I am working. 

http://valdavis.com/OccupyLullaby.mp3

I would love to hear feedback.  Is the bass ok?  Does it have too much treble on your system?  Are the vocals too loud?

Thoughts on the tune?

Thanks for your help and inspiration.
Val


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Coaxial
SHINE ON
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Location: 543 miles west of Paradis,1491 miles east of Paradise
Posted: Dec 6, 2011 - 12:52pm
Sounds good to me, Val. I really don't hear any strain in your voice and your guitar work is nice and tight. Good luck with it my friend, may it become the anthem of the occupyers....{#Meditate}
Antigone

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Location: A house, in a Virginian Valley
Posted: Dec 5, 2011 - 4:02pm
Listened to it twice. Like it a lot. Your voice sounds a bit strained, like you're trying to reach notes slightly out of your range. Guitar and bass are very cool and "twisty."
HazzeSwede
Riding in The Side-Car,whoosh!
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Location: Vinyl Land
Posted: Dec 5, 2011 - 9:06am
That would be an Occu Pie!
Don't ask..have no idea what's in it.

Treble is OK by me.
 Bass as well.

The guitar at the end is very nice,generally, most vocals are too loud for my taste but hey that's me.
Mixing is an art,ask Kurt...hey maybe he would like to have a go at it!

Cheers and god luck !{#Cheers}
vald
Val Davis Music
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Location: Here now
Posted: Dec 5, 2011 - 3:42am
What kind of pie?

v
HazzeSwede
Riding in The Side-Car,whoosh!
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Location: Vinyl Land
Posted: Dec 5, 2011 - 3:07am
Cool,after just one listening,all I can say is that I'm craving pie.{#Hungry}
We'll see if anyone will come forward with some thoughts.
Here's a direct link.